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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia 
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Ghosts of you Ghosts of you Haunting my reality Cold chill across my heart Walk on my grave Silent and dark Ethereal and shadowy Insubstantial as your words Intangible as your love Inconsequential as your existence In my life Ghosts of you Distracting me from reality Brushing at my soul Stirring at my mind Soft and misty and impenetrable Untouchable as your heart Unreachable as your soul Unending as my love Tess |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem, Tess! Welcome to the Pub!! Denise |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
thanks for the welcome I'm enjoying reading the avriety of poems here...so glad i discovered this place  "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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William P Bussey Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188 |
Tess, for a gal from downunder you have a lot of big words in you, Welcome to our pub, yours and mine,I enjoyed reading your words. |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
William - Thanks for the welcome to the pub! Big words, little words….I think I just have too many words sometimes editing was never my strong point!! "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Tess this was so hauntingly good I loved it "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning" ~Randal Jarrell~ |
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wonderous Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 75 |
i totally agree with starr |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Starr Gazer and wonderous - Thanks for taking the time to leave me a comment "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Tess, I like this a lot !  Welcome to the Pub and show us some more.  |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Tess this is really very good. Welcome and I look forward to reading more of your work. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Tess, Ghosts of you haunting my reality....I surely can relate to that line. This is a great piece. Welcome to The Pub. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tess, Great poem....haunting. Loved it though. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
Tess--Wonderful poem!! I can surely relate to those feelings. I hope we see more from you soon! "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare |
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