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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Often my thoughts wander off to a world Where dreams and wishes secretly unfurl My deepest desires, or inner screams Where mem’ries precious are no longer dreams Deep inside my soul I hide my true fears Loving and laughter, can’t let them come near When life’s too harsh to deal with at times That’s when I hide in this place out of time My soul so fragile and scared to be hurt That’s when there’s no vision and life’s a blur I miss out on friends, I miss out on life But I am willing to put up a fight For life’s too precious not to be lived I hold in my hand a God’s given gift I’m blessed with some friends, very dear to me Came out of my shell, with them I am free There’s no need to hide, with them I am safe Once more life feels like a warm cozy place Loving and laughter must let them come near No longer hide in this dream atmosphere Where deepest desires and inner screams Are merely memories and only dreams Munda  [This message has been edited by Munda (edited 03-22-2000).] |
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William P Bussey Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188 |
Very nice Munda, I enjoyed the positive note in your words, sounds like you have it all together, with just a small bit of hesitation now and then, but it's ok to be cautious, good poem bill |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Munda, This is Beautiful, For life's to precious not to be lived I hold in my hand a God's given gift This is so sweet and melodic! WELL DONE! Dennis :^) |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Munda this is a very good poem. Many of us have been hurt so often and so deeply that it's hard to trust in others. This causes us to miss out on so much. It's great to have friends that can teach you to trust again. Very nice poem. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Munda!  Denise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
A star shinning bright twenty four hours a day sweetly illuminating every heart beating hour laughter and rhythmic songs dance me away within her living dreams kissed with friendship Sweetly illuminating every heart beating hour I dance in her sunshine and sleep in her stars graced by her silliness and caressed by love a truthful friend I have found to cherish forever Laughter and rhythmic songs dance me away to a universe where her kind spirit's sparkling star dust upon the Internet ground I tread on making every keystroke a memory of honor Within her living dreams kissed with friendship lies a beautiful soul full of flowing abundant life she's like a pot of gold at the end of a rainbow a star shinning bright twenty four hours a day |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Bill - thank you. Glad you enjoyed. And you're right...still cautious. Dennis - Thank you I thought you may like that. (((((HUGS))))) childomine - Yes we often get hurt, but I'm healing And yes I am learning to trust again. Thanks for reading and your kind reply.Denise - Thank you Gloria, Gloria, what can I say. I tried to think of a proper reply, but every time I read your poem, tears fill my eyes. Thank you for your beautiful words. You honour me greatly. ((((((((((HUGS)))))))))) I love you too. [This message has been edited by Munda (edited 03-22-2000).] |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Munda, This poem is absolutely beautiful. ----- Here's another wonderful poem I received today from a wonderful friend, who doesn't even know she wrote this poem: It's a beautiful Spring day and I really would like to go outside to hear the birds sing and see the trees sprout. Maybe tomorrow. I see no seagulls today. I love watching a single seagull soar on the winds. I always pretend I'm there with it. [Sigh....] I guess I'm in a funny mood today. It feels as if there's music and poetry in everything today. ~M. ----- ~Gene [This message has been edited by u_gene (edited 03-22-2000).] |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Munda this was beautiful, inspiring !! "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning" ~Randal Jarrell~ |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Starrgazer - Thank you very much  Gene - I AM in a funny mood today. LOL Never thought of that as a poem. Let's see if I can do a little better than that. ((((((((((HUGS))))))))))It's a beautiful Spring day I hear the birds sing And watch them seek twigs To build their nest Their twitter sounds Like a lullaby The trees start to sprout Their buds fresh green The colour of Spring The wind caresses The branches and Daffodils bloom Leaving a smile upon my face With their bright Yellow leaves Whispering a promise Of summer Munda [This message has been edited by Munda (edited 03-23-2000).] |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
I loved that munda... there was so much i could relate to in it... i am so used to your "lol" on icq... it's wonderful...this side of you... (((((((((((hug)))))))) you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
first, i absolutely loved the poem. ithought it was great. i can sympathize too, you're not the only one that has that world to retreat into, good work, keep it up rich-pa |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Avanti - Thank you and (((((HUGS))))) to you too. Glad you enjoyed. rich-pa - Thank you It's a good place to hide now and then, but not too often. I forget sometimes there's a world out there. A beautiful world for those who wish to see. |
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