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wonderous Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 75 |
i awoke last night and watched you sleeping by my side i longed to touch you to lay down my head and hear you take lifes breath but i held myself not wanting to awaken you the moon drifted out of the clouds the stars shone down the waves gently whispered not wanting to awaken you a smile transformed your face i knew it was i who put it there i could hold back nomore i reached out to touch your lips and awoke alas 'twas i who hadn't been awake [This message has been edited by wonderous (edited 03-21-2000).] |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Wonderous this is very good. So often our dreams seem real. Too bad this one wasn't more than a dream for you! ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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wonderous Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 75 |
thanxs childo mine there is something wrong with the last two lines can anyone help please |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, sad poem, Wonderous. If you need to change anything just go in under the edit function on top of your poem and fix anything that you would like to. Denise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderous, indeed you have opened my eyes to your name. . . I too have seen the sleep of my love, and wondered if it was I who was sleeping. . . Excellent, my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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