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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Candle Glow Your eyes sparkle with reflected light The candle’s glow becoming green flames Casting loves shadows on the canvas of my mind A single beautiful moment in the flowing river of time A warm candlelit dream held for all eternity Deep within the walls of my beating heart © 3/19/00 Gary Pence Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night. -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh Gary, this is soooooo beautiful! Romantic! Denise |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Gary you are such a romantic!! Whomever it is that evokes this in you is one lucky person! I love the following; "Casting loves shadows on the canvas of my mind." Once again - a superb poem!! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Gary, Oh wow!! This was so beautiful...I can feel my heart melting, and no its not from the candle lol. Your poem touched my heart completely. Thanks so much for sharing. AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you! Yes, I do love romance! |
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Another Heather Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 93Canada |
Well, I certainly agree with the others here, very beautiful. This is one of those "I wish someone wrote that for me" poems. Well Done Jonas! "Be yourself... No matter what they say" - Sting |
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