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mermaid´s secret

why not
Junior Member

since 2000-03-06

Posts 10

0 posted 2000-03-18 02:12 PM

the first time since long
she slides her hand
into the pocket
of her old jacket

together with
dripping sea weed
her hands covered
in mud
she reveals

that picture she
long wanted to
forget
now she laughs

this once been
personality
sunken onto the
ground of her memory

her red hair that
falls onto her shoulders
then was short and
dark

all the girls
used to love him
this personality
now swimming,
alive in the
pocket of
that old jacket

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-03-18 07:43 PM

'sunken onto the ground of her memory'
Great line! Great imagery! Great poem!

Denise

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

2 posted 2000-03-18 11:24 PM

This is excellent! This is really very, very good!!!

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