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why not Junior Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 10 |
The stars I turn around tonight I feel you here right by my side The wind I chase out to the sea I sense your touch one we will be The darkness hides in corners flees a pulsing sound I hear it breathe I don´t believe you are not here my senses swallow away my fear I don´t believe the elements await to see us indulging to our fate My thoughts released my soul prepared for this single moment that we shared ~ I hear you breathe, I feel your touch, every moment that we are apart ~ [This message has been edited by why not (edited 03-18-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful poem! Denise |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Beautiful remembrence and longing in this! Kim |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Your poems penetrate the heart. They are so touching in their love and longing. |
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Die In Vain Junior Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 15B.C., Canada |
I really liked your poem. It was very nice. |
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