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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Grey sky casts shadow Pounding rain!Ouch!Darts for cover The last drizzle ends Spectrum of colours.Warm feel Smile.A pot of gold,perhaps? this is in response to your poem "suffer in silence"...hope u feel better ") incidentally,this is entitled "Enlightenment" [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 03-18-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I like this! A happy little poem! Denise |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Interesting....made me think. Thank you for sharing your talents. INclan |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This is lovely ! But did freckles see this ? I better send you back up ! |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
kaile--Thank you so much. Again I must say that the support that I have received has been heart-warming. I enjoyed "Enlightenment." Munda--No, I had not seen this until a friend let me know it was here; thanks for "sending kaile back up." < !signature--> "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare [This message has been edited by freckles (edited 03-20-2000).] |
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