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Her Power |
Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Her Power Your warm fingertips press lightly against mine Sending tingling sensations throughout my body Awakening within me such hunger and desire that I lose all control Your delicate touch overwhelms my senses As hypnotic green eyes draw me ever deeper into your passionate world Taking me mind and soul I surrender willingly to your power over me Melting into you as your very essence consumes me An undying desire to be yours my last coherent thought © 3/17/00 Gary Pence Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night. -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so passionate, Gary! Well written! Denise |
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WhisperingWind Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 28Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading. |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Gary, once again you've done a fine job of building a vivid picture with your words. VERY sensual. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Great poem Jonas |
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