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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon 
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sun kissed petals white gentle breeze blow tonight please carry safely in your arms and keep my love safe from harm lift him high upon your winds remind him of the love I send never let him see me falter wash me clean upon love's altar spill my sins across the sea unfetter this soul's agony let me fly safely home let me for my sins atone I cannot face another day scars of pain across my face set me free oh winds I plead do not watch me slowly bleed I want not for a mortal thing only wish my love to bring something I can never grasp or dare to hold in my hand's clasp elusive as a wisp of mist I try to clutch within my fist to nestle you close in gentle arm and keep me safe from any harm for with you I am only safe I've found my heart's resting place let me sleep a moment more rest in dreams of the one I adore carry them with me through the day drizzle you through the words I say my faraway smile I cannot hide as your love bubbles from inside no matter near, no matter far I am there where e'er you are |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
This is breathtakingly beautiful Angel!! |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
I love the repeated feeling of safety in love in this poem. It flows so well and the warmth is apparent. Let love shine on, the answer is LOVE jon |
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WhisperingWind Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 28Ontario, Canada |
I really like this poem. Well written. Brought a tear to my eye. Love always does that to me. I found this peice one of the best. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
childomine....thank you very much  Jon....love should be safe, shouldn't it? A haven.... WhisperingWind...I am flattered, thanks! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Lovely sentiment, Angel. I felt the love and the longing in this. Simply beautiful. Good to see you venturing in the rhyming arena, too. Michael |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is breathtakingly beautiful, X Angel! Absolutely beautiful! Denise |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Hmm...no, not breathtaking...this is just a whole new level of poetry, Angel! I can't really come up with a reply for this because I'm really not sure what to say about it...but it's a whole new level, that's for sure! Incredibly beautiful work!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
A wonderful and heart touching poem. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
So, all this time you've been able to rhyme, eh?? Nice job, my friend. Then, of course, there's the message here... Isn't love like that special??...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely done...beautiful |
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