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Sunday poem #2 |
Another Heather Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 93Canada |
This never happens during the week I can usually find the answers I seek But this gloominess always blinds my sight There's something about Sunday night. I can go six days without you in mind But on the seventh day, i always find Thoughts of you are impossible to fight There's something about Sunday night. I get home, excited to dream but it never fails, or so it seems That sleep won't come to me tonight There's something about Sunday night. "Be yourself... No matter what they say" - Sting |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Simple and direct but very pointed. I like it. Like a spear Jon |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Good poem..usually though, Sunday night I think about work on Monday...makes me nauseous! |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Isn't funny how a certain night (day), song, scent, sight - something - is harder on us than any other? Good poem. |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Well, my problem with Sunday night is that I usually have to go to school the next day...lol You did a wonderful job of expressing what kind of stuff goes on the night before ________--I'm going to have to print this out! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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