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wonderous Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 75 |
sanity returns and i loose yet again so i stay away untill you need to escape into the illusion for just this one last time you declare your love for me you curse fate you dream of a future you wish for eternity i ask only for the present i ask only for a few stolen moments you put stars in my eyes you promise me the world and fool that i am i believe in your words then sanity returns my heart is broken and i loose yet again [This message has been edited by wonderous (edited 03-13-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderous, this is a fabulous first post! Very well done! For a title how about: 'Sanity Lost and Found' or 'I lose again' or 'Illusion'....just some suggestions! Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions! Denise |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
You have a way with words. I like your poem. Jon |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
How about---Stars In My Eyes--- Although I like Denise's titles too. I was also going to suggest--Illusion-- Up to you. Please post what you decide. Joy |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Welcome to Passions  very good first post umm for some reason --Illusions-- spoke to me as well but I kinda like Joys Stars in my eyes too ... ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Great poem, a little sad, but true. Welcome to the forums, wonderous. ~Gene |
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wonderous Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 75 |
thanx denise, jon, joy, starr. i guess by popular demand illusion it is thiugh i must admit i liked stars in my eyes too. thanxs again for a warm welcome |
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wonderous Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 75 |
thanxs gene this was written for a man i ve known since i was 13 which is half my life . we lost contact over the years but recently got in touch over the net. we are in different countries seperated not only by thousands of miles but also by social barriers: he unfortunately is married and one of the few people around who will always honour his commitments. |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Wonderous, Welcome to the Pub. I enjoyed your poem and certainly can relate to the hurt here. Well written and look forward to more of your posts. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A wonderful first post. Welcome to the Pub ! |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Wonderous welcome to the Pub! I enjoyed this poem. When love is treated as a game by one, it becomes a very painful illusion to the other. Look forward to reading more. |
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Another Heather Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 93Canada |
This was lovely. I read it a few times and I liked it more each time. It gave me a nice feeling of melancholy which everybody needs now and then. I look forward to reading more of your stuff "Be yourself... No matter what they say" - Sting |
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