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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Haiku To You ~*Marge Tindal*~  Spring twitters it's song Urging flowers forth to spring Birds of feather flock Oaken limb of tree Bends with the blow of the wind Boughs bow gracefully Shades of sunlight rise On break of morning sunrise Beauty lights my eyes Glad to share with you Tiny bits of my Haiku See what you can do *Thanks to U_Gene for the invitation to the Pub ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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why not Junior Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 10 |
 How do you do that? Beautiful poems and also the presentation- I must admit I´d go for a simpler version- but still it is cute. The bird seems to "twitter" the lines. why not |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Marge, What a beautiful presentation. You did great at the expression in this Haiku. Glad you are posting at the Pub. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhyNot~ Glad you enjoyed. This little bird just seems to fit the Haiku. I enjoy 'dressing' up some of my poetry. Ahhhh ... he does seem to 'twitter'.  SasiKat~ Thank you for liking and for the warm welcome to the pub. I hope we will also see some Haiku from you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lancelot Junior Member
since 2000-03-10
Posts 19Camelot |
Marge, These are beautiful. Great presentation. I love the bird. Oh, "twitter." I thought you said, Tweety. LOL  Everyone, take note of this example...this is how to write Haiku! ~Lance [This message has been edited by Lancelot (edited 03-13-2000).] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Marge, This was SOOOOO good! Thank you for sharing these treasures! Dennis :^) |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Marge, Thanks for dropping in. This is really beautiful. Excellent. Don't be a stranger, there's always room in the Pub; you and your haiku ---- Gene |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lance~ Thank you for the accolades. For you - Face of daffodil Smiles at glow of morning sun Ah! Spring has begun Dennis~ Thank you for liking. For you - Afternoon delight Shades of spring's blooming color The world is aglow ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
U_Gene~ Thank you ... you sneaked in there while I was posting before. Thanks for your comments. I have enjoyed sharing these Haiku pieces with this forum. I'll be back ... For you - The essence of Spring Heard in the twitter of song Sparrows on the lawn ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
These are delightfully wonderful, Marge!! I love them!! Denise |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I agree with everyone else when I say, Excellet job with these haikus. I have recently tried some, but they don't come close to yours. I've just got some things to learn, that's all. Please come back soon, huh? Joy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thank you, dear. For you - Hearts a'fluttering Heard around the world as song Must be Spring singing Joy~ Thank you and I will be back. For you - See out on the lawn Springing forth purple beauty Flocks and flocks of Phlox ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
lovely work from you...enjoyed them immensely |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I found you! wonderful you! |
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