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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
its not the best but here i go.. A Question For You ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I have a question i want to ask you you see.... at least once a day i sit and wonder why can't you love me? Is it because all i've done? is it that you just think "she's not the one"? Is it because you've never touched me? or whiped away my tears? is it because you think you can't protect me from my fears? Is it because i'm here? and you're over there? or is it simple for you there is just nothing there? The answer to this question i would like to know. Maybe if i knew it would be easier for me to let go. I've thought about it but don't understand because you see... i love you with everything in me [This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 03-12-2000).] |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
How sweet! Lovely poem. Sorry I can't say more, but really, let's try it anyone. *photocopies every synonym in the thesaurus for 'extremely good'* ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Angie, Lovely poem. I have the answer to your question... Maybe he needs to open his eyes and heart--and see what he's missing. ~Gene |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~angie this is a wonderful poem, and one that asks a very important and serious question. i have an answer to it too, cuz men are fools lol. i hope he wakes up soon and sees whats right in front of his eyes. take care, amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Fe, I have no answer for your question, but I hope he comes to realize how precious your love is for him and that he answers your question with his love for you. Beautiful poem. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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Another Heather Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 93Canada |
Wow, now that's a question I've asked a lot. That last part: "You see... I love you With everything in me." totally made the poem. I loved it! "Be yourself... No matter what they say" - Sting |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Perhaps one day he'll stop and hear Open up and loose his fear The doubt will go the mist will clear And he'll see the beauty standing there Love your verse Jon |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
thanx guyz gene: if thats the answer can you do me a favor and tell him i said hurry up!!!!!!!! Aimster: lol i like ur answer thanx thanx everyone and i hope he does to!!!!!!! i jus ished if hes gonna do it he would hurry up lol im gettin impatient! lol |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Angie, this is great. Answers ? Oh dear, I have none. It seems Love and I don't go together. |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
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