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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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If nothing else at least we had a good time But all things change as time moves along Now I know you love one more than me, dear You freed me and to myself I belong If nothing else at least we know we had fun But laughter turns to sorrow as time rolls on Our secret place now stands alone and empty And I still wish I was the only one If only we could heal this rift between us Nothing would we have but joy and fun But in your eyes I see that we are drifting And I still wish I was the only one Alicat 5-6-97 As I sit here dimly thinking Watching modem lights a-blinking Churning out poetic hash. Lord, in all Your piety, Help me keep my sanity: Please don't let the modem crash! --Alicat |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a sad one, Ali. Very touching. If nothing else, perhaps some memories to cherish. Denise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent. Very sad though. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I really love the line "You freed me and to myself I belong". By the way....love the rest of your poem too. : ) |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
been there.. Nice work. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
ouch....I've been there too! "You freed me and to myself I belong" Wonderful line Alicat! Like this poem I do A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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blueyz75 Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 138IL |
I like to think that in a relationship there is a bigger whole then the two people, but that the two excist still seperate and alone. My stubborn independance talking there! Kelly I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
LOL that's one |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Once the memories get past the hurting stage they will bring you much joy and keep the person with you always. Another good, albeit sad, poem from our dear Alicat. |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
So very sad, yet beautiful. Your work is great. I hope your sadness turns to joy soon. Sheila |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Sasikat put it so well--"sad, but beautiful." Great poem, Alicat!  Go, Munda! Yeah! *cheers*  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can really relate to this, from both sides |
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