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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas 
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It's the touch of a stranger that reaches out to care The hug from a friend that says "Hey, I'm there..." It's the laughter of a child filled with innocent glee The gentle wind that guides us and sets our spirits free It's the teardrops that fall when hearts get broken The words that are exchanged when no words are spoken It's life's greatest plaesure and most heart wrenching pain The promise of which makes us want to try again It's the way I feel right now when thinking of you Three little words that make all the difference "I love you!" ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Great flow, great topic, great message - great poem. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
STARR this is perfect...and nice to see you rhyme(smile)..I love the opening line...sweet expressions of honest emotions in this one..very nice take care,janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. janet marie |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Wow!! This is just GREAT! I'm going to print this out now...  Amazing job on this, Starr! Glad you decided to post this in the Pub, and hope to see you around here more often! Thanks for the read!! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful!  Denise |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Thank you all for the great comments -- Janet actually free verse is a newbie kind of thing for me rhyme kind of comes naturally, or at least I don't have to work at it as much ... Thanks for all your comments to my posts and your encouragement ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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