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just_another_fe
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-03-07 08:16 PM

The sun is shining.
The sky is blue.
I'm sitting outside
dreaming of you.
If you were here
what would we do?
Would you sit here with me
holding me close to you?
Would we go for a walk
holding hands
and start talking about
makind distant plans?
Would we play a game
or shoot around the ball?
would you catch me
if I was to fall?
Would you grab my sides
with your hands
or spot me
if I did hand-stands?
Would you kiss my lips
then pull me near?
Would you pat my stomach
or smack my rear?
As I sit outside
dreaming of you
I think of all
that we could do.
Then a dog barks
and a little kid screams
and like that I awaken
from this wonderful dream.

Sasikat
Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL

1 posted 2000-03-07 08:22 PM

Fe-

What would we do without our dreams? Sometimes they do turn into reality, so don't lose sight of your dreams. I enjoyed reading this.

Sheila

Gene
Senior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

2 posted 2000-03-07 08:26 PM

"Would you kiss my lips
then pull me near?
Would you pat my stomach
or smack my rear?"
---

Woohoo! I like the way you dream.

~Gene

Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

3 posted 2000-03-07 08:40 PM

I speak from joyful experience...dreams sometimes can, and do come true. So hold on tight to your dreams. Nice work!

Little_Spyro
Senior Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA

4 posted 2000-03-08 06:58 PM

Yeah, dreams...great things, and so time consuming but they're great all the same! You did a wonderful job of portraying your dream, fe!

This is one of your better poems, I think...

Great job!

Little Spyro T. Dragon

"Daydreams aren't a waste of time. They're possibilities. So go for one."

-Ensign Harry Kim

[This message has been edited by Little_Spyro (edited 03-08-2000).]

just_another_fe
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

5 posted 2000-03-25 04:11 PM

I hope this dream does come true

but i have my doubts lol@gene

John the cat
Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 357
England

6 posted 2000-03-25 06:21 PM

If the poem was written to me...the answers would all be yes..I couldn't resist after reading this

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