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Wildflower's Song

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

0 posted 2001-04-29 01:20 AM

the fifth in the wildflower series

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As in a dream,
I sit, gazing,
at your beauty.

You speak to me,
a soft whisper,
almost a sigh;

Of crimson fire,
to ignite my limbs,
and thudding heart.

Of asure blue,
to calm my anxiety,
erase my doubt.

Of forest green,
to awaken my sences,
to peaceful tranquility.

Of deep violet,
to sound my depths,
enlighten my soul.

your whispers caress,
this troubled spirit,
my beloved wildflower.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2001-04-29 02:48 AM

This last stanza was great.

your whispers caress,
this troubled spirit,
my beloved wildflower
Great choice of words. I enjoyed it.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2001-04-29 11:04 AM

This is a vry soothing, tranquil poem. Joyce

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

3 posted 2001-04-29 01:04 PM

...*sigh

'tis a wonderful dream you weave, Sire Wordmaster...

WO

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

4 posted 2001-04-30 02:54 PM

Peaceful poem. Listening with your soul.
Thanks for sharing.
Melton

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

5 posted 2001-05-01 12:00 PM

thanks for the read friends...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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