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Invading my readers |
Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Let me pierce your mind, One thought at a time, I creep closer to your memories, Leaching them of any records, You just sit there and enjoy this poem, While I gather the rest. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Wow, You leave my mind alone. It' going fast enough. Joyce |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Ha Ha. Joke's on you. Wife says, "Nothing there". Melton |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Thank your for your comical responses. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
While you are reading my mind let me know if something you find. Been said nothing's there So better beware My brain was left way behind. Jack |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
creepy piece...never thought of poetry as that way..good read..i wonder if my mind has already been brainwashed by the poems i read? |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
er, wanna add this to my library |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Your responses are overwhelming my friends. Thank you for letting me in your mind. LOL Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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