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~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2001-04-25 03:08 PM


You're so sad...
your teary eyes show tonight.
Will you smile?
Just once?
You're so pretty...
Please don't cry baby.
But, if you will,
use my shoulder.

I know it hurts...
I feel it , too.
In my heart.
Can I cry, too?
Sometimes the pain is too much...
I'll share your pain,
and your sadness.
We'll weep together.

© Copyright 2001 derrick gillum - All Rights Reserved
Trillium
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1 posted 2001-04-25 03:50 PM


A crying shoulder does help ease the pain sometimes.  Good poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

Wikket
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since 2000-01-29
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Santa Clara, CA USA
2 posted 2001-04-25 06:44 PM


I only wish in my darkest hour, I'd have a friend like you.  Inspired!

~~Jamie

"There are no unlockable doors
There are no one winning the wars
There are no unrightable wrongs or unsinkable songs..."  --Ozzy

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3 posted 2001-04-25 07:44 PM


It's nice to have someone to share with.  even the pain.  Joyce
Moon Dust
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4 posted 2001-04-25 07:48 PM


this is nice.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
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Mississippi coast
5 posted 2001-04-25 09:34 PM


...We'll weep together...

Excellent!. A true friend.
Melton

twinsgd
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Ontario,Canada
6 posted 2001-04-26 06:17 PM


Somebody is fortunate to have a friend like you.

Jack

mistyrose
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 75
state of anxiety
7 posted 2001-04-28 05:30 PM


~dreamchild~

true friends are there
during the good times
and the bad
obviously you
are a true true friend
bless you

mistyrose~

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2001-04-28 05:45 PM


DreamChild~
Holding another's tears is one true measure of friendship.
Nicely done.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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