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wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

0 posted 2001-04-22 10:31 PM

The depth of perception is equal to the compression
of inane thoughts that ride on mindless waves of deception.

Little quirks simply shirk to wander and lurk in waves of time
while meandering through endless rhymes of lingering conclusions.

Trivial inanities lead to complex insanity beaded on wire-strung
introspections between far-reaching polarities of wry irrationality.

Consent notions, empty potions, undermine emotions to unpin
deep-seated elaborations to futilely spin with unilateral locomotion.

Short-circuit course will only endorse that this chosen mentality
wandered out of force in a waffled down batter of baffled mind.

All this confusion leads to fruitless delusion in need of transfusion,
to wait, to anticipate that it is not too late to relate a mistake.

To realize that dreams are not trivialized only considered civilized
when it seems that reality leans in reflection of our true direction.

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wordancer trips through a maze of words looking for what, she does not know….

Wordancer, the one who dances with words.

[This message has been edited by wordancer (edited 04-22-2001).]

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-04-22 11:18 PM

A wordancer you are. This is very clever. Joyce

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

2 posted 2001-04-22 11:23 PM

Hey, it makes sense to me, "Dances with Words".
But then again, I'm pretty weird, huh?
So maybe we should get a second opinion. lol
Good wordplay though. Thanks.

"The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty."
coyote

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2001-04-23 06:22 AM

wonderful use of word play here...you are a "Waltzing Wizard of Words" and this makes perfect sense to me... I love it! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

kodak
Junior Member

since 2001-04-22

Posts 10
London

4 posted 2001-04-23 03:09 PM

I agree. This is great. Tong twistingly good. This poem begs to be read aloud.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2001-04-23 06:38 PM

Really fun to read!

Betty Lou Hebert

twinsgd
Member

since 2000-02-13

Posts 416
Ontario,Canada

6 posted 2001-04-25 12:35 PM

Fun with the language....too deep for me but I had fun trying.

Jack

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

7 posted 2003-11-25 02:32 PM

beautiful piece!

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