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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-04-21 07:20 AM

pale blue breaking
clouds of puce
to cinnamon
and pinks of youth
and all the puzzle
is revealed
edge of clouds
that boast of teal
birds
in celebration sing
words
that don't say anything
The cock he crows in echoed dawn
announcing that he does belong.
Now lavenders invade the sky--
the shades of sleepy lovers' sighs...
Heated shades of red and pink
fire from horizon east
and should you look
within the flame
you see the yearning
is the same
and every spark
of day in new
a love in lark
of me and you...

The magic of the rise is done.
I pale beneath the yellowed sun.
and shaken as the leaf on tree.
this show, that happened, just for me.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-04-21 10:39 AM

This is very beautiful. A sunrise is truly a spectacle. Joyce

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2001-04-21 05:42 PM

Wonderful description of a spectacular sunrise, which is always a moving experience.

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-04-21 08:12 PM

MsHood~
Here I find you in morning splendor
with such a breathtaking render !

Gorgeous sunrise imagery !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

4 posted 2001-04-22 10:50 AM

Excellent, descriptive verse. Wonderful colors and imagery. Very, very pleasant read.
Thank you.

Mike

kodak
Junior Member

since 2001-04-22

Posts 10
London

5 posted 2001-04-22 07:12 PM

good poem. You paint a nice picture.

kodak
Junior Member

since 2001-04-22

Posts 10
London

6 posted 2001-04-22 07:12 PM

good poem. You paint a nice picture.

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

7 posted 2001-04-23 08:33 PM

Wow that left me in a daze I hadn't relize i'd come to an end. I like this

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

twinsgd
Member

since 2000-02-13

Posts 416
Ontario,Canada

8 posted 2001-04-25 12:09 PM

Beautiful...so very much more than colors to be seen and heard at sunrise ......been there.....loved this

jack

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

9 posted 2001-04-28 04:01 PM

Thanks to all...you always give me a warm welcome here in the pub! I appreciate all of your generous replies very much.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 2001-05-02 02:54 AM

ahhh Ms Serenity
This is beautiful girl.

Welcome to the Pub

Maree

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-08-26 12:45 PM

well lookie here at what I found

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