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another little love story |
Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
She is There Waking up wet and cold early in the am, terrified. Reaching out for comfort and she is there. Walking into a roomful strangers staring, unknown. Reaching for reinforcement she takes my hand. Watching a silly, sad movie tears softly falling, stinging. Reaching out for assurance and she pats my arm. Winking playfully, sexy giving her that intimate smile. Reaching out for loving she kisses my lips. Wearing all our many years love in most every day. Reaching out for comfort and she is there. the artist once upon... |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Good one, Tramp. Been there done that, it's real. Thanks. "I hate quotes, they suck!" |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is sweet Daniel. Soft, warm and comforting, just as love should be. Check your e-mail! |
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Red_Feather Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 131The Vagabond Sea |
What can i say? I hope to be able to write such words one day. It gives me hope that someone can. One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lucky lady to have a poem like this written for her. Joyce |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Yeah a very lucky lady you have there Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
lol hey Denise...done checked my email and will write more later... thanks for the comment! kinda a barebones piece but warm and fuzzy, eh? thanks to y'all for the imput and comments...appreciate em! the artist once upon... |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
She's nice.I like her |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
I guess this is what love is all about! Nice tribute to someone special! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Oh that was a sweet poem. Gives ya warm fuzzy's for sure Suzanne |
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