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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
"Dancers" High tails, wild ponies red dust stirring under hoof drums on the desert swirling in their wake ghost dancers long forgotten celebrate the wind "The only thing new in the world, is the history we don't know." |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
oh what stirring images to make the blood sing outloud, especially the second one. -wordancer |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Hauntingly lovely! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thank you so much, ellie & wordancer. I feel very lucky, to see the wild horses nearly every day.  "The only thing new in the world, is the history we don't know." Harry S. Truman [This message has been edited by coyote (edited 04-02-2001).] |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Great image of wild America's western frontier. Melton |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh these are hauntingly beautiful Billy. Great Stuff m'friend Maree |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I like this one a lot. Thought you did well on it!  |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
What a keen eye you have to observe all this beauty. Joyce |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
You are really getting the hang of these! This is nice. You give me a vivid picture of something I have never seen for myself.To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks everybody. I'm really glad you liked 'em. "The only thing new in the world, is the history we don't know." |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
coyote: I loved this and could really picture the horses. I lived in the high desert country of Nevada for a number of years and I do miss the horses and wild burros we used to see, plus all the other critters. Betty Lou Hebert |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks, Betty Lou. "The only thing new in the world, is the history we don't know." |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
You get the big Thumbs Up! on these... lucky you to see such things. Peace! |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Coyote - to paint such strong pictures with so few words is a talent indeed - very vivid and memorable! Lary |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks, Lary. For stopping to read. "The only thing new in the world, is the history we don't know." |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
coyote... just couldn't help myself... carrying over our conversation from my thread, here is my offering for you: Sad End to An Apology Forlorn, a small apology had hopes he'd be accepted; applying for a steady job, he often was rejected. He trundled off in sorrow, fell into an errant hole; he broke his humble attitude and lost his self-control. Apologies, unused, are such a waste of careful thought; but once they change their wistful shape they can't be sold or bought. (Just had to get it out of my system, I guess!) Lary |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Told ya, a Catch-22!!!lol "I hate quotes, they suck!" |
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
Coyote, - Very good. I saw the dance on the wide open spaces of Wyoming - a John Ford epic... Panne |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Aye, Panne. The Steppes of the Red Desert are truly, "God's Country". Thanks you so much for stopping by to read. "I hate quotes, they suck!" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
YES! |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks, Karilea. Glad to see your back. Thanks so much for reading. "I hate quotes, they suck!" |
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