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Gone away again (A Song)
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
I don't know why But I can feel you Looking down on me I can't say how I know you're gone But inside you're still here with me And while I try Your voice just Seems to speak right on through me While I've gone away again I know now why you left I couldn't stop you then And now I've gone away again I hear you crying Your soul Lost somewhere deep inside of me Please know that I'm trying But this vision, it isn't mine to see I look up now And I can see You're looking down on me Please tell me how You can be gone And still Be right here with me Forever I cry Your tears just Seem to soak Right on through me While I've gone away again I know now why you left I couldn't stop you then And now I've gone away again I hear me crying, Myself Lost somewhere deep in all thats you Its time to stop all your denying And look at the tears that I see through |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this. It was a little departure from your regular style, but then again this was a song and songs do tend to be different. I love writing lyrics and music to them. ANyhow, nicely done here. I am a fan and this was wonderful.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I sung your song aloud and it sang in my soul. Joyce |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Thanks Dopey! Hey, when are you gonna post works here? I'm dieing to see what you write like. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
It made me feel a little sad, and that means it is well written! Betty Lou Hebert |
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