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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA

0 posted 2001-03-27 11:47 AM



I don't know why
But I can feel you
Looking down on me

I can't say how
I know you're gone
But inside
you're still here with me

And while I try
Your voice just
Seems to speak
right on through me

While I've gone away again
I know now why you left
I couldn't stop you then
And now I've gone away again

I hear you crying
Your soul
Lost somewhere deep inside of me
Please know that I'm trying
But this vision, it isn't mine to see

I look up now
And I can see
You're looking down on me

Please tell me how
You can be gone
And still
Be right here with me

Forever I cry
Your tears just
Seem to soak
Right on through me

While I've gone away again
I know now why you left
I couldn't stop you then
And now I've gone away again

I hear me crying,
Myself
Lost somewhere deep in all thats you
Its time to stop all your denying
And look at the tears that I see through

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Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2001-03-27 02:46 PM


I liked this. It was a little departure from your regular style, but then again this was a song and songs do tend to be different. I love writing lyrics and music to them. ANyhow, nicely done here. I am a fan and this was wonderful.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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Washington State
2 posted 2001-03-27 02:53 PM


I sung your song aloud and it sang in my soul.  Joyce
Wobbly Head Bob
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3 posted 2001-03-27 02:55 PM


Thanks Dopey!  Hey, when are you gonna post works here?  I'm dieing to see what you write like.
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4 posted 2001-03-27 06:06 PM


It made me feel a little sad, and that means it is well written!  

Betty Lou Hebert

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