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Trillium
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0 posted 2001-04-08 05:33 PM


I see her everytime I go
Into the city and I know,
Just where she lives but not her name
And it has always seemed a shame,
That we can't visit on our way
And add a bright spot to our day.
I always smile and say:  "Hello"
And she responds, but lets me know
That she prefers to sit alone.
I feel rebuffed and yet I've known
From the first, no inclination
Lay in casual conversation.
Now she's not pretty, but her face
Is memorable and from my place,
I study her and try to find
What keeps her image in my mind.
I think it is the sadness there.
An element of deep despair.
She wears a cloak of mystery
And fascinates a part of me,
That always wants to understand
The "ins" and "outs" of what's at hand
And so we ride, day after day.
She in her seat across the way.
I guess that it will never change
And yet, it does seem very strange,
Two people all alone, as we,
Can't join in camaraderie.


Previously published by Illiad Press 1994
Betty Lou Hebert

[This message has been edited by Trillium (edited 04-08-2001).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-04-08 06:13 PM


Very good Trillium and sad.  Who knows what friends you might be.  Joyce
coyote
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2 posted 2001-04-08 06:48 PM


Elton John is playing as I read this, Betty.
"It's No Sacrifice"
Ya know it kinda fits.
Good definition of our human frailty,
and a good read. Thanks.

"I hate quotes, they suck!"
I.G. Norance

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3 posted 2001-04-08 11:25 PM


Thanks Joyce:  This is written about a memory from World War ll.  I always felt she had been wounded by the war.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2001-04-08 11:26 PM


coyote:  Thanks for reading and I see what you mean. The song does sort of fit.

Betty Lou Hebert

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