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Haiku for Spring

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-03-13 11:38 AM

The frost hardened ground
Is now but a memory
Reclaimed by new life!

Springs subtle rains fall
Waking, foliage takes first sip
Smiles, stretches upward

New colors explode
Rainbow spectrum reclothes earth
Masterful brush strokes

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-03-13 02:21 PM

Nice job. I liked the last one best, but I think "foliage" is three syllable.
Still, great descriptions. I absolutely love the Haiku/Senryu format.

~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-03-13 05:35 PM

I liked this a lot. Very nicely done.....quite serene here.
I could just picture everything.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

3 posted 2001-03-15 11:43 AM

Dennis,
Thanks for the beautiful bouquet image.
I especially liked- “Smiles, stretches upward”.
Melton

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-03-15 06:16 PM

A beautiful picture of Spring painted by you! I always enjoy your haikus/senryus! Now, I can't wait for Spring, even though it's almost here

Take care,
Melissa~

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