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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
Eyes Cemented hazel eyes sweep over you flushing my trembling body I swallow my words looking for life in your eyes as I finger touch your face reaching to lips, raising a smile leaning in kissing lips, nose, eyes listening to your heart each breath pounding in my ears 'til I can hear nothing but their silent roar rapt in the stillness, statuesque I cement my eyes to yours and descend upon your blue. ~Wynter/ve "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 03-09-2001).] |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
nice decribes the moment well ![]() Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
rapt in the stillness, statuesque I cement my eyes to yours and descend upon your blue. beautiful! ![]() Maree I may know the word but not say it I may know the truth but not face it I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound but turn my head indifferent. Natalie Merchant [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-09-2001).] |
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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
This is real nice....captures the feeling so well..... Twilah |
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jbaker Member
since 2001-02-16
Posts 74Australia |
Lovely words to describe this feeling...Nice read. JB Smile and the whole world smiles with you. Keep smiling! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is breathtakingly beautiful, Maureen! Lovely! |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Ahhhhhh...zzzzz moment! You have captured it so well in this marvelous piece! Bravo! ![]() ![]() ~~Jamie I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
MoonDust Dark Angel,Twilah,JB, Denise, Wikket thank you all for reading and your responses huggzz Maureen/Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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