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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Eyes Cemented hazel eyes sweep over you flushing my trembling body I swallow my words looking for life in your eyes as I finger touch your face reaching to lips, raising a smile leaning in kissing lips, nose, eyes listening to your heart each breath pounding in my ears 'til I can hear nothing but their silent roar rapt in the stillness, statuesque I cement my eyes to yours and descend upon your blue. ~Wynter/ve "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 03-09-2001).] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
nice decribes the moment well Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
rapt in the stillness, statuesque I cement my eyes to yours and descend upon your blue. beautiful! Maree I may know the word but not say it I may know the truth but not face it I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound but turn my head indifferent. Natalie Merchant [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-09-2001).] |
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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
This is real nice....captures the feeling so well..... Twilah |
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jbaker Member
since 2001-02-16
Posts 74Australia |
Lovely words to describe this feeling...Nice read. JB Smile and the whole world smiles with you. Keep smiling! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is breathtakingly beautiful, Maureen! Lovely! |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Ahhhhhh...zzzzz moment! You have captured it so well in this marvelous piece! Bravo! ~~Jamie I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
MoonDust Dark Angel,Twilah,JB, Denise, Wikket thank you all for reading and your responses huggzz Maureen/Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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