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My star of the night |
Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
The wheels of time turn Darkness is overcome by light In the twilight, my heart begins to yearn Holding on with all its might Time stands still Seas rise and fall The heavens do my will Winds reach out and call You've given me courage in m dreams My candle in the night, Beacon in the darkness, My star of the night... "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Always good to have that extra comfort felt by a guiding light. Excellent read and nicely rhyming! |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Im sure someone out there is happy to be your star in the night, because you are a mirror which reflects the light back wondefully writen. Keith every day is a new day with which we can change the world |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Beautiful Thanks for sharing |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
and we all need that courage and encouragement. I love the way this flows! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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jbaker Member
since 2001-02-16
Posts 74Australia |
Very nice. thanks for sharing. JB |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I have a star up there, I've had a few wishes come true too, Lovely The world doesn't stop for you, but you can stop for the world. |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
thank you all for your kind words. I do have a wonderful star of the night. Thanks for reading. |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
I find great peace in this - as though you are sharing the hope and the faith you have found... Thank you! Lary |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
The nice thing about this poem, other than its lovely thoughts and how nicely it's written, is that it could be read more than one way. For that, you have my applause. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
beautiful for some reason, the poem flowed thru my read it was truly an amazing read thanks for sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Cassers, this is absolutely beautiful...finding those shining stars is a great thing, isn't it? Wonderful read my friend. *Krista Knutson* |
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robin-shep Junior Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 28northern California, USA |
dawn eclipse, that is choice. i am new here, trying to find who i like. this is the first of yours i've seen. it's choice. |
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