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Dawn Eclipse
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The Horsehead Nebula

0 posted 2001-02-27 04:57 PM



The wheels of time turn
Darkness is overcome by light
In the twilight, my heart begins to yearn
Holding on with all its might

Time stands still
Seas rise and fall
The heavens do my will
Winds reach out and call

You've given me courage in m dreams
My candle in the night,
Beacon in the darkness,
My star of the night...




"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


© Copyright 2001 Cassandra Roseen - All Rights Reserved
Wobbly Head Bob
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1 posted 2001-02-27 05:00 PM


Always good to have that extra comfort felt by a guiding light. Excellent read and nicely rhyming!
Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
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Forest Lake, MN, USA
2 posted 2001-02-27 05:32 PM


Im sure someone out there is happy to be your star in the night, because you are a mirror which reflects the light back wondefully writen.
Keith

every day is a new day with which we can change the world

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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Calif.
3 posted 2001-02-27 10:02 PM


Beautiful
Thanks for sharing

ellie LeJeune
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King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2001-02-28 07:03 AM


and we all need that courage and encouragement. I love the way this flows!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

jbaker
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since 2001-02-16
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5 posted 2001-02-28 07:44 AM


Very nice. thanks for sharing.
JB

Moon Dust
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6 posted 2001-02-28 06:44 PM


I have a star up there, I've had a few wishes come true too, Lovely

The world doesn't stop for you, but you can stop for the world.


Dawn Eclipse
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The Horsehead Nebula
7 posted 2001-02-28 08:58 PM


thank you all for your kind words. I do have a wonderful star of the night. Thanks for reading.
laryalee
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since 2000-06-19
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Alberta, Canada
8 posted 2001-02-28 11:36 PM


I find great peace in this - as though you are sharing the hope and the faith you have found...
Thank you!
Lary

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
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Presque Isle, ME
9 posted 2001-03-01 12:05 PM


The nice thing about this poem, other than its lovely thoughts and how nicely it's written, is that it could be read more than one way. For that, you have my applause.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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Twilight Zone
10 posted 2001-03-02 06:14 PM


beautiful
for some reason, the poem flowed thru my read
it was truly an amazing read
thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Alwye
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In the space between moments
11 posted 2001-03-18 10:24 PM


Cassers, this is absolutely beautiful...finding those shining stars is a great thing, isn't it? Wonderful read my friend.

*Krista Knutson*

"Can't run fast enough
Can't hide I can't fly
I'm struggling with the limits of this ordinary life..." ~Tracy Chapman

robin-shep
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since 2001-03-18
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northern California, USA
12 posted 2001-03-19 03:46 PM


dawn eclipse, that is choice. i am new here, trying to find who i like. this is the first of yours i've seen. it's choice.


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