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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
We see the Inn, through freshly fallen snow, As streams of smoke rise from the chimneys three; Tall sentinels, their arms snow laden now In silence seem to call my love and me. Unnoticed as it’s nestled ‘neath the trees Protected from the storms that come its way; On drawing closer, we at once perceive A place where we shall spend each loving day. Our haven from the storms of life that seem To try to keep us from the love we feel; Tis there we may be free to live our dream, To love and thus consent our love as real. Our secret place that only we will know, Our hearts combined as one.. no one between; The love we have will then begin to grow, Fulfilling one by one..our every dream. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Twilah: I first read ths deliciously romantic poem in "The Poetry Garden" where we both post and it enchanted me then! I am so glad to see it posted here for everyone to appreciate! It is even more romantic on the second read! love, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
lovely romantic song you have woven here..bravo! the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
It doesn't get much better than this.  Here's to the fulfillment of dreams, my friend!To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
Ellie, Pegasus, KCSGrandma..thank you so much for your comments. It is so nice to have feedback as you all know. And such nice ones, too.. ) thanks again...."T" |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
OOOOOOH, so romantic! Makes me wish my honeymoon was much, much closer. Although, we're going to Hawaii and I don't know about the snow or the inn for that manner. Superb! All I can say is more, more! ~~Jamie   I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
sooooo Romantic.. ~Maria~ |
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