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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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What is in the air? the earth is shifting it's scent fertile smell of Spring elusive but surely there my poetic senses know A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I must say that is is "blooming" good read. Melton |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I do believe you are right my dear..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this very much! Let's include it in the newsletter! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
What a beautiful smell isn't it?  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jbaker Member
since 2001-02-16
Posts 74Australia |
Very nice Ellie. Where do you get your inspiration from? Love to read these. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Ah the breath and hope of Spring, Reviving thoughts-to make our spirits sing After a winter like ours, it is a sure bet, Many are asking,"Is it over yet?" Loved your refreshing, anticipating, and positive poem, David No Better Place do I know Than where Hearts knit as one, For in that grand experience, The Better ALL become. God Bless us All!!! |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Nice one, Ellie. Interesting how you could recognize the seasons by the scent even if you didn't have other clues. Hope it's really coming soon! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
A mag-nif -fi- scent poem! Congradulations for making the newsletter! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i think i relate well to this one..ever since i started writing i have been an observant freak... may our poetic senses always know!! [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 02-18-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
It's just around the corner!!! This is lovely, Ellie!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
ah yes,!!!!! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Perfect intro with spring just around the corner As always I truly enjoy reading your poetry. Deb |
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