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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Memoir Stunning Individual Seizing my breath Floating succulently beyond peripheral visions in my mind O’ tis delectable You, your trifle lips! Gratification burning Pining in Indulgence Of your physique Tis’ nothing quite like the savory remembrance of crumpled sheets Patterns left on love’s bed Words fail as I try to express the traces your embrace- left. Your indelible mark left in ink within my diary until our next clandestine meeting The words shall read “I await you - until we meet again, my love.” (In the vision that was presented to me a woman sits at her desk by candlelight and writes her heartfelt thoughts.) ©KdW, Copyright 2/20/00 |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Great job Kim. Very sensuous piece of work!! The ending portrayed such a lonely wanting. Held my attention and I longed for more to read when it was over. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Kim! Very well written. Denise |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
This presents such a clear picture...your poetry's great, Kim! I'm glad you came to the Pub!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
KIM, this is SUPERB...I love this poem... candle lit desire and passion...ahhhhh I like your style  very well written.take care, janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. janet marie |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
All, Thank you  There is no hint or trace of my romantic nature behind this writing, is there?! ; ) This one was very different for me honestly.. I could "see" the image as I wrote. (A very unique experience) Kim |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
A beautifully crafted picture Kim......will anxiously await the sequel. |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
*Smile* It would be neat to have this only be one chapter ....... we shall have to wait and see when and *IF* that Inspiration strikes again! Thank you for your comments they do mean ALOT to me! Kim |
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