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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Sweet tender muse Come singing in the night Deep into the dark Heralding the dawn Sliping in when I wasnt looking As my eyes were on the stars Whispering to my heart A melody I must follow Keith W. Mullin every day is a new day with which we can change the world |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Sneaky little one isn't she? You never know . . . but I think that you invited her on this night. Are we to hear more of that night melody? |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
The best things happen when we aren't looking. ![]() To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Nice job putz. I am a firm believer that the best things happen when you look to the stars. They're special things that watch over you. Wonderful poem. ![]() "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Playing games in the twilight Teasing just enough And enticing me in To those sparkling eyes guess I wasnt quite done yet. I kinda forgot the part that links my muse to a cerain someone. Krawdad, you will never know just how right you are. kcsgrandma, yes, good things do happen when we arn't looking, and I have every intention of welcoming her in. Cassie, you're right, the best things do happen while looking at the stars ![]() every day is a new day with which we can change the world |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
The best word i can think of to describe this lovely poem is "heavenly"! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
a will-o-the-wisp, that special muse..fading in and out of our lives, teasing, but, oh so dull without her..lovely piece..good things do come in small packages. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was very beautiful. I liked this one a lot. You have true talent. Wow I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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