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Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
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Forest Lake, MN, USA

0 posted 2001-01-31 12:42 PM


Sweet tender muse
Come singing in the night
Deep into the dark
Heralding the dawn

Sliping in when I wasnt looking
As my eyes were on the stars
Whispering to my heart
A melody I must follow

Keith W. Mullin


every day is a new day with which we can change the world

© Copyright 2001 Keith W. Mullin - All Rights Reserved
Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

1 posted 2001-01-31 01:00 AM


Sneaky little one isn't she?  You never know . . . but I think that you invited her on this night.  Are we to hear more of that night melody?

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
2 posted 2001-01-31 01:18 AM


The best things happen when we aren't looking.     Just welcome her in and keep writing like this.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
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The Horsehead Nebula
3 posted 2001-01-31 11:06 AM


Nice job putz.  I am a firm believer that the best things happen when you look to the stars.  They're special things that watch over you.  Wonderful poem.  

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


Wesley the Blue
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Forest Lake, MN, USA
4 posted 2001-01-31 11:28 AM


Playing games in the twilight
Teasing just enough
And enticing me in
To those sparkling eyes

guess I wasnt quite done yet.  I kinda forgot the part that links my muse to a cerain someone.

Krawdad, you will never know just how right you are.

kcsgrandma, yes, good things do happen when we arn't looking, and I have every intention of welcoming her in.

Cassie, you're right, the best things do happen while looking at the stars  

every day is a new day with which we can change the world

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
5 posted 2001-01-31 07:56 PM


The best word i can think of to describe this lovely poem is "heavenly"!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
6 posted 2001-02-01 07:30 AM


a will-o-the-wisp, that special muse..fading in and out of our lives, teasing, but, oh so dull without her..lovely piece..good things do come in small packages.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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7 posted 2001-02-01 01:53 PM


This was very beautiful. I liked this one a lot. You have true talent. Wow



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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