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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA 
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there is no beauty in war. . . my far-staring eyes see no more a new mouth grins underneath a baby-faced chin as the startled mind screams a last red-river stream oh, this belly, a nest of squirming white worms blindly falls out to steam in the radiant light how futilely these empty hands twitch to reach for a loved one so far away and see those legs of mine? why they don’t run anymore. . .detach in surprise they lay—a forgotten article of war. < !signature--> "Come...dance with me, into my world of words." [This message has been edited by wordancer (edited 01-29-2001).] |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
You should have put this one in the dark room where it could be appreciated. What a wild nightmare of a dream. Extremely intense indeed. Good job. *thanx*   mYsTiC |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
hum... thanks for the reply, it was almost too intense for me...lol. The images flitted through my mind last night just as I was drifting off to sleep ...woke up so startled that I had to get out of bed to write it down. [This message has been edited by wordancer (edited 01-29-2001).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
"dark as the night that covers me.." Invictus this is a gripping piece..short, horrific. nice work. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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