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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2001-01-26 07:43 PM


If I had wings...
I'd soar through the sky,
I'd float on the breeze,
And watch the clouds go by,

If I had wings...
I'd mingle with the trees,
I'd sway with the branches,
And dance with the leaves,

If I had wings...
I'd Trickle down the stream,
I'd hop between lillies,
And join firefly's beam,

If I had wings...
I'd soar through the sky,
I'd float on the breeze,
And watch the clouds go by.


When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it.



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Songbird
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1 posted 2001-01-26 07:50 PM


Flying, the ultimate freedom, to defy gravity!  Nice poem has a song like quality.
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2 posted 2001-01-26 09:18 PM


Thanks songbird

When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it.


deleeme
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3 posted 2001-01-26 10:44 PM


What a wonderful dreamer You are!!!
Your wonderful flights of fancy are a delight!
            David

kcsgrandma
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4 posted 2001-01-27 11:08 AM


Very nice, Maria!  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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5 posted 2001-01-28 12:35 PM


Maria~
I've shared these thoughts.
Sometimes I'm sure I've soared before.
Nicely done.
~*Marge*~


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Dawn Eclipse
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6 posted 2001-01-28 06:04 PM


Wonderful thoughts.  There is so much to see from a bird's eye view, isn't there?  I enjoyed it a lot.  

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
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Dark Angel
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7 posted 2001-01-28 06:07 PM


If I had wings.... I'd do all that you mentioned too  

beautiful and refreshing Maria  

Maree

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8 posted 2001-01-29 04:48 PM


well..you finally spilled my little secret..yes, flying is a joy..lol

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


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9 posted 2001-01-29 05:19 PM


Thanks everyone, your so kind

pegasus - Since when was it a seceret


When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it.


wordancer
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10 posted 2001-01-29 05:54 PM


ah, flying free... the nameless desire the freedom to be

"Come...dance with me, into my world of words."


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11 posted 2001-01-29 06:37 PM


Wordancer - aye,tis that

When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it.


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12 posted 2001-01-30 12:26 PM


  Very good u got my vote, to want a set of wings... oo wouldnt that be fun... great job!!

All i ask in life is a beautiful woman to love, and a little sip of faygo too... MCL

JOY 14
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13 posted 2001-01-31 01:50 PM


Maria,
I love this poem. It's so simple and carefree. I want to fly too and do all the things mentioned in your poem. Thanks for writing this!  

Joy

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