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Swamp¤Faeryie
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fairyland....of course;)

0 posted 2001-01-25 02:15 PM


stretch towards the sky,but don't break your back.
All that necessary pain is included in the sack.
Some call it life,some call it jail,
but I call it boisonberry stale.

The taste of a sunset like rainbow sherbert,
don't notice the bitter arsenic covert.
Some say beauty,some say poison,
i say it looks like a berry boison.

The moon throws fire at the earth each night,
but we stand under stars to romance despite.
You may think it stupid,think it's from a book of faeryie
But i think it's simple,just plain boisonberry........



Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman

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Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
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1 posted 2001-01-25 07:24 PM


!! ^_^ This is a very boisonberry poem.. I like it.. MM, I never thought of a sunset as rainbow sherbert.. I'll have to try some sometime.. sounds delicious..  
Lovely, Swampie ^^
-Lynne

Wobbly Head Bob
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2 posted 2001-01-26 10:43 AM



While I may be risking my rugged and manly pose...This is pretty!  Extremely colorful, and very well painted...and it tastes good too!  "Some call it life, some call it jail"...Now thats a line!

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3 posted 2001-01-26 08:21 PM


well thats a whole new way of looking at life. Oh and I want some of that serbert too

When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it.


allan
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since 2000-04-09
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On the road
4 posted 2001-01-27 05:46 PM


This is sweet like cyanide... I like it 'cause I like bittersweet the best... Well done, this captures a wonderfully ambiguous atitude to this life - one I share myself... 'loved it!
Swamp¤Faeryie
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fairyland....of course;)
5 posted 2001-01-30 01:32 PM


Thanks all   and please do try rainbow sherbert,'tis most wonderful,my fave!! And take a moment before digging in to observe the lovely swirls of color   lol thanks!!

swamp


Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman

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