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blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

0 posted 2001-01-25 12:22 PM

     I feel that I am slipping
Into a bottomless hole of hell
     If I'll ever regain my fotting
Only time can tell

     I am lost in my own nothingness
Without any sense of life
     And I just can't seem to remember
How, before, I ended my strife

     It seems vaguely familiar
How I once found my way
     It seems that it was you
Who happened to save my day

     I must now be doomed
For you left me high and dry
     That's when I lost my footing
The day you left me to die

     But I will cry no longer
I'll simply accept my fate
     That's what I should've done
When you closed the door and locked the gate

     But I've still got one minute
To drown in my sorrow
     So I shall quote a famous poet
And "say goodbye 'til it be 'morrow."

I think that I have finally found my muse again!!!

I'm quite proud, hope you all enjoy!
Alicia A. Renzelman

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

1 posted 2001-01-25 05:23 PM

Well then, welcome back.
I enjoyed it, hope there is more.

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

2 posted 2001-01-25 05:46 PM

Alicia this is lovely.. so sad though! I hope u find your fotting soon.. footing *_^ Well, you have every reason to be proud. ^_^ a beautiful piece.. glad to see ur poetry back.. ^_^

Luv,
Lynne

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2001-01-25 09:12 PM

Yes, I think you have found your muse again, Alicia....great feeling, isn't it?!

Denise

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

4 posted 2001-01-25 11:19 PM

Good for you, Alicia, on the recovery of your muse, and on accepting things and moving on.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

5 posted 2001-01-26 08:36 PM

Oh good I lost mine only while back. Just makes sure you make the most of it before it dissappears again. BTW I like this one has a real positive feel.

When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it.

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