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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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16 Was Long Ago strands of words were softly braided through skeins of music recklessly woven and draped me lovingly in silk, did he with patterned patter of tender loving and I will never forget him soft, then softer, held by his voice and lost, O lost, there was no choice and yearn, O yearning, I was quit forbore I then of any wit and I will never forget him heavy lashes hooded soft brown eyes jet dusk hair softly characterized his nondescript sense of abject living but yet he had this way of giving and I will never forget him he was such a young man's bad boy captured females' hearts as his toys and yes, O yes I fell for his ploy and the parents, O, he annoyed… and I will never forget him there's always one, there's always him that one who keeps a romance's whim when strands of words are softly braided and a love like that will never be sated and we will never forget them. 01.20.01 |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
You took me down memory lane with this one, thinking of old boyfriends, none of whom was forgotten, but some of whom should be.  Glad you shared this here tonight.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Sunshine.... Ahhh....the mark of first love etched in our hearts forever.....Thanks for the trip down memory lane...it was lovely. Ranea |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Wonderful poem, but why do you women always fall for the bad boy?  Gene |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
KCSgrandma...you're welcome!... Ranea, thank you [lovely name for you, btw]... Gene, I don't know...you tell me?...luckily, most of us get smart! |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
oh i do like this one. definately a trip to the past. Suzanne PS> I think we fall for the bad ones cause we know our parents would hate them. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
such cherished memories of young love..we all have them I suppose..wonder if they would be shattered like the fragile dreams they are if we were to meet those people today..as we are now..? the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So true, so true, Karilea! Beautifully written, too! Denise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Suzanne, thank you for going back a ways with me...I don't know that it was a parental thing...more animal magnetism...but you know, he never even looked my way... Pegasus...most assuredly, your words are more prophetic than you know... denise, you find me just about anywhere, don't you!...thank you! |
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