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Wendy Flora Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 182Virginia |
gravity friction wasn't working today but thank God for gravity the glass slid from my hands to shatter on the linoleum finely cut crystal fragmenting into innumerable pieces how fitting i had been thinking of you |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Wendy, "Sharp little piece" , this. I like it. Love the short form . . . Krawdad |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
How fitting that you should write this short but poignant poem. Aamzing how many little pieces our hearts can break in. A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is a cutting tribute to a shattered relationship. You've packed a lot into this short poem. Very nicely done. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Wendy Flora Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 182Virginia |
thank you. -wen |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one here. I liked this one a lot. Good descriptions here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
very clever piece..well done the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
the conceot of glass shattering in relation to a broken relationship has been done many times but i want to say this was done particularly well... short intense piece..thank you for the read  |
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