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Tanka's? |
Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Orchestra performs Yet a sole violin plays My life's symphony ~~~~~ A single true tear In the corner of my eye Purifying rain ~~~~~ Fragile seed planted In the garden of my heart A crack in the wall ~~~~~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
wow, i liked them a lot!! Very nice! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Very lovely, Munda. You should write mor Haiku, you're great at it. Gene |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Orchestra performs Yet a sole violin plays My life's symphony I liked all of these, Munda, but this is my favorite. It is something to think about - What instrument would be playing my song? Thanks for something to mull on for a while. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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William P Bussey Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188 |
You say a lot in such few words, and they all are so real and intense. I don't think I have every read this type before, maybe I will try it myself. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Munda, Tankas? no....tankas are 5-7-5-7-7 Beautiful haikus? YES! you're a natural! I liked the ALL! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Tanka you, tanka you, for these beautiful haiku..or is that haikus? Lovely, Munda! Denise |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Count me in on the complements - beautiful work! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
These are good I have to agree with the others Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i ditto kcs, your first senryu really caught my attention...i found myself wondering that perhaps no instrument would play my life's symphony since i am not musically inclined... great work |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Thank you all very muchly from the Dutchie. : D And thank YOU Dennis and Gene for refreshing my mind. |
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