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Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19

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0 posted 2001-01-18 07:42 PM

....my dearest friend Blue..sent me a picture of herself and her baby boy...I was messin with its color level..and was inspired...wish I had a way to show you....Sol

Nose to nose with him I'm laughing
Nose to nose he smiles at me
Never knowing at this moment
His whole future do I see

The days of crawling, walking
Late night feedings up with me
All the fussing and the fighting
Over carrots or strained peas

The days of school and summer
Flying by with lightning speed
The snuggling times of Holidays
Round a glowing family tree

Will he meet a wondrous woman?
Who will take him then from me?
Will she gladly call me Mum?
Will he marry one like me?

Nose to nose with him I'm sighing
His tender Mum is all he sees
His fingers brush my teary cheeks
His smile is all I see

[This message has been edited by Solstice Son (edited 01-19-2001).]

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2001-01-18 08:38 PM

I know how those little ones can inspire us. This is lovely, Sol!

Denise

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

2 posted 2001-01-18 11:15 PM

This is pretty, Sol, and left me wanting more. I'm sure it will appeal to lots of Mums. It certainly did to me.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

3 posted 2001-01-19 08:02 AM

Denise and Marilyn...as always * hugs* and deepest thanks..

Marilyn..there's a reason you were hungry....I saw that for some reason there was half a poem missing!!! So here's the rest

Sol

bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04

Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand

4 posted 2001-01-19 08:37 AM

Sol....

Oh, I love this! *sigh*

Ranea

Romy
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since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

5 posted 2001-01-19 10:17 AM

I think this is a beautiful portrait of a mother's hope for her child...thank-you for sharing, it's lovely.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-01-19 02:44 PM

Beautiful one here .......i likes.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

7 posted 2001-01-19 06:26 PM

Yes, Sol, that is much more satisfying! Thanks.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Gene
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since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

8 posted 2001-01-19 06:38 PM

This is a wonderful poem to give to your friend. It flows off the tip of my tongue.

Gene

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2001-01-19 08:41 PM

SS, sighhh how I miss those days, my son is 7 soon to be eight and your poem took me back to those baby days. I miss my little baby hehe

beautiful poem
you touched me with this one

Maree

I can't help but feel my heart fall between the pregnant
pause of all you won't say and all I can not ask

~Jewel~

Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

10 posted 2001-01-20 11:46 AM

Thanks everyone...when I was a boy..my mom would write stuff like this all the time...(( yes I get it all from her ))..only I had no idea why she'd write it...frommy point of view...I was still just as sweet and wonderful *L* (( a man's ability to see himself as he wishes starts at a very young age))

But now...with my own kids..I understand

Sol

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

11 posted 2001-01-20 04:39 PM

I could almost see the picture that inspired you! Lovely... so lovely!

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13

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New Zealand

12 posted 2001-01-25 07:51 PM

*sigh* this is so sweet Sol.. what an adorable poem..
Lynne

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

13 posted 2001-01-26 10:42 AM

I love the sentimental feelings you have penned here. This would make a lovely card. You definately have a talent.

Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

14 posted 2001-01-26 04:31 PM

Thanks everybody.

everyone in this world has a Muse it seems...for some time now Blue has been mine...and a grateful man I am

Sol

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

15 posted 2001-01-26 08:08 PM

awwwww so sweet

When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it.

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