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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States 
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I Am I am beautiful and talented, I wonder when society will learn to accept me, I hear the wind calling to me, I see beauty in a baby's smile, I want to be free to be me, I am beautiful and talented. I pretend to dance perfectly, I feel love from a friend's touch, I touch children's hearts with my strength I worry I'll be alone in old age, I cry when we are apart, I am beautiful and talented. I understand the world can be cruel, I say thanks to God for my friends and family, I dream of being in your arms, I try to heal the world, I hope this poem helps you to understand me better, I am beautiful and talented. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
You certainly are talented, and though I have not seen your face, you have revealed a beautiful soul.  Thanks for sharing this. I read a lot of the other replies in Open. You met the challenge well.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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gofor42 Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 143Arkansas |
Wonderful poem...I can see the piece of your soul that you infused into the work. "If you can't annoy somebody, there's little point in writing." --Kingsley Amis |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Wonderful! You are as sweet and lovely as this poem and your gift of poetry. Know that such inner beauty will attract others with the same gift of pure spirit to you. Love, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
I really don't know too much about you, but from your basic statement I would say you are quite a confident person, or very conceded. But to veiw your peom as a whole, I see evidence of the former, and of your assertions-you are beautiful in your caring, and loving- in your tender attachment to the young. You are talented in your self-expression and and practical in your outlook and concerns. I find in your self-evaluation a very appealing person, one that I wouldn't mind knowing more about. Thank you for your introduction & sharing. David No Better Place do I know Than where Hearts knit as one, For in that grand experience, The Better ALL become. God Bless us All!!! |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Callie, Your talent is as obvious in your poetry as your beauty, which is shining throughout every word! Thanks for sharing the attributes that are inside each of us if we are brave enough to admit they are there! Debbie |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Yes, you ARE beautiful and talented. (((((HUGS)))) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You certainly are beautiful and talented Callie. It shows through your writing. I enjoyed it very much Maree I can't help but feel my heart fall between the pregnant pause of all you won't say and all I can not ask ~Jewel~ |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Dawn, You are a creative, talented caring person who writes from the heart. Good introductory poem! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
To a friend, I know so well. Your poem a pleasure, At your house we dwell. You are everything, That you see, Your the best friend, From you to me. I see the time Has come for you To open your eyes And see the truth. Your confidence And self-esteem, Were low for a time This poem you needed. Great Job DAWN!!!. Loved it. It's about time you see what you are. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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