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JOY 14
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0 posted 2001-01-15 11:23 AM

flowing blocked by ice
summer itching for freedom
snow lock on live white
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wordancer
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1 posted 2001-01-15 11:54 AM

oh...lovely, yes snow is alive...

Joy, why don't you post this in the #1 challenge thread, that way all the haiku and responses are kept with the picture.  

-wordancer
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2 posted 2001-01-16 08:39 AM

i liked your last line a lot..it seemed to present a lot of possibilities
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