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wordancer
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0 posted 2001-01-09 11:19 AM



In the dark corners of our minds;
there resides a whisper,
the night flight of wings,
a long ebony call.

Never quiet;
a distant shade beckons surrender
into the galaxy of thrashing wings.
Madness looms;
behind the thought-beats
of a vanished day.

Look!
The crows are flying!

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"Come...dance with me, into my world of words."




[This message has been edited by wordancer (edited 01-09-2001).]

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pegasus111
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1 posted 2001-01-09 02:49 PM


Ahhh, yes..what a difference a line makes..superb my sweet wordancer..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


wordancer
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2 posted 2001-01-10 10:39 AM


thanks peg...dem crows, they really be flying today!   I do so love exploring the dark corners of the mind.



"Come...dance with me, into my world of words."

inot2B
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3 posted 2001-01-10 07:00 PM


Some of us have bats in the belfry, others just cobwebs in the mind.  I like to just watch the crows fly.
Romy
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4 posted 2001-01-11 09:01 AM


Yes, I can see them...I have heard them  beating their wings, but couldn't make out what they were until now...
Wikket
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Santa Clara, CA USA
5 posted 2001-01-11 10:45 AM


Oooh...I like this piece...so dark and forboding...hehhehe  I have seen those crows of which you speak and am reminded of another poet's work:

". . .Quothe the raven:  'Nevermore'" --EAP

Great work!  *CLAP CLAP CLAP*

~~Jamie      


I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett

wordancer
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6 posted 2001-01-12 01:05 PM


Thanks my friends for walking with me in the dark corners....  
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7 posted 2001-01-13 12:33 PM


Nice one here. I liked it a lot.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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