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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA 
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Cold, cold rain Beats down on her But she struggles on Right foot, left foot Almost choreographed Swaying side to side Arms in motion Legs afire They watch her Think she's a moron 'What's she running for?' 'What's the point?' 'Didn't anyone tell her?' But she doesn't hear She keeps in motion Always forward They don't see her Not viewing the magic Nor the beauty Of one so dedicated One who persevered Above the tragedy Out of the sadness Striving hard A smile on her face Along the changing route Her freedom shines The strength beams From her tired body On the Enchanted Path She won't be joined Not here One, Two, Three, Four Her tired cadence Keeps her going When her feelings won't Ignore the pain A beautiful lady Keeping a pace in A tired world [This message has been edited by Wikket (edited 01-06-2001).] |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Oh i liked that. I feel like that every day.Like i am always walking never stopping Trying to keep my pace. That was a really good read. Suzanne |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Thank you Suzanne.  This poem comes from deep inside...not just me, but everyone! Trying to keep the pace...it's a tough job, but someone's got to do it! Thank you for your comment!~~Jamie   I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I've never been fond of running, and have often wondered why other people are. Thanks for the insight into one possible reason. Nicely written, too.  To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Thanks kcsgrandma...truthfully, I was never fond of running either! In fact, I still don't really like it. Yet, I do it, because in the end I know I can say to myself 'And you thought you couldn't run that far, silly!' Thank you for your comments and trying to understand! ~~Jamie I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
if we don't test our own limits..who will? this is a very fine piece of writing.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Hmmmmmm...life at its finest..is an uphill climb....at worst...a spiral downward to oblivion....you have shed the light on what keeps everything from falling apart...people like her * points to the poem * ...who just don't stop. kudos Wikket Sol |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
pegasus: Thank you! Although it hardly stands up to your masterpieces! Sol: Gracias! Although today, the person in that poem might not live up to her own standards! I guess we all have bad days...but, she wishes it could be a little easier!   Thanks again! ~~Jamie I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this poem was pretty powerful and full of depth. A wonderful read for me. I truly enjoyed this one. The title is great too. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
This poem definitely could be read many different ways - I couldn't help but grin though, at how much it reminded me of my daily trots on the tread. I ask myself 'why' every stinkin' time, and when I'm done, I always know the answer. |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I liked this! The deeper message encourages me to keep trying to do my best,strive for endurance against all obstacles! Stay afloat, run like the wind! Thanks for the motivation! |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Wikket.... I agree with Debbie....Great motivation....Thanks! Ranea |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Thank you everyone! I know I have trouble finding the right motivation every day! I'm glad you enjoyed the read?! Who knows, maybe we might meet up someday on the marathon trail (or the treadmills at the gym)!  P.S. Dopey Dope...I love your signature!  ~~Jamie I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Hi Jamie, Good to see you again. I enjoyed this very much. Hey, did you know by running in the rain, if you time it just right, you can run in between the rain drops and never get wet.  ~Gene |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi Jamie, despite all the pain and hassle, i love running(both literal and metaphorical)..this poem reminds me why [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 01-17-2001).] |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
u_gene: Thank you for your kind comments (BTW...I didn't know about the rain thing--I'll have to try it next time I go out). I look forward to seeing more of your work! kaile: I'm glad one of us likes it! Just kidding. Thanks for your comment.< !signature-->I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett [This message has been edited by Wikket (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Does this sound familiar! LOL Great read Jamie. |
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