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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
don't ask me where it came from..I truely do not know.... " Poison! " she cried. "Poison is Your love!" though your face not commonplace like an angel's from above You dared to take the love I gave seeming kept Your heart from me and now without you still I ache my heart is not yet free. But oh, Your words, Your kiss, Your touch as sweet as life to Me and oft i dreamed of wedding bells on the day You'd marry me But You've been called away to war that we may all be free but now I sit....poisoned still.... crying now for Thee. |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Wow...deep for not knowing where from it came! *clap-clap* Another Masterpiece! ~~Jamie   I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
 ... its sad the way war makes love so far removed...sometimes theres an unexplained story within..this one must have escaped by way of your pen  very nice writing.. hugs, g< !signature--> "sometimes a closed door provides us with walls to lean on....." -kathleen vibbert [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked this one. THis was so great! Another wonderful read.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this is a strong piece Sol..very nice.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A very deep and strong piece SS, this line really hit me ...... but now I sit....poisoned still.... Wonderful! Maree I need a lullaby a kiss goodnight Angel sweet love of my life Oh, I need this ~Natalie Merchant~ |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Thanks everybody...I figured out where I got this from...well sorta....I was watching A Midsummer Night's Dream...and the cadence of all those laments before the faeries fixed things...stuck in my head....I had the first two lines of this poem up in my noggin for a week and ahalf before the rest and the sequal came out...poetry cannot be manufactured it would seem... Sol |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Beautiful, Sol. The love that waits for her hero to return...So romantic. Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Oh my gosh, she is so tormented... hehe, what a true love you have expressed, so awesomely in this piece Sol!! Love, Lynne |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Sol... A love to dream about, perfectly written. Best |
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