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Lonely Shadow
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since 2000-03-14
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Virginia

0 posted 2001-01-04 06:15 PM


Slowly closing my eyes
as I fall into gentle slumber
Out of darkness, I see a beautiful woman standing before me
as she draw near, I realize that this beautiful angel is you
a smile seems to curl my lips, never waking
As I admire your radiant beauty in my mind
and the beauty of your loving and caring heart
Feeling the warmth of happiness deep inside
as I hear your soft voice echo
your eyes, shining like emerald stars
I reach out to touch you, then slowly I open my eyes
a tear rolls down my cheek as I realize that it was only a dream
lying there, wishing I could have you with me
that I could hold you in my arms
to feel your soft lips pressed to mine
I gently sigh, knowing that this wish, this dream
will never become a reality... but I know in my heart
that my dreams will be filled with images of you
I know that I shall never look upon you with my own eyes
but I will always have those dreams
and I shall cherish them always

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Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

[This message has been edited by Lonely Shadow (edited 01-05-2001).]

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a_little_girl
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since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
1 posted 2001-01-04 07:02 PM


Wow...sometimes love is only a fantasy and not much else. This is well expressed here.  


~~My soul lives in love, walks with serenity, writhes in hatred, and dies in violence.~~
Myself



pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2001-01-05 07:16 AM


yes..a fantasy most of us dream about but few of us realize..nicely done..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2001-01-05 07:20 AM


Ah, the fantasy of an inrequited love, sometimes a gift to soothe the lonely hour. This so beautiful! Ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



DawnG
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4 posted 2001-01-05 01:11 PM


I agree with everyone else. This is very beautiful.

                         Dawn

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
5 posted 2001-01-05 02:49 PM


I have had dreaams like this for years, but trust me love turns up, some times in the most unusual places. Continue to dream and one day they shall be real. well written enjoyed this alot.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

Wikket
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 340
Santa Clara, CA USA
6 posted 2001-01-06 11:05 PM


This was very moving for me...my fiance did the same thing when he came to see me for the first time.  I thought it was impossible for a guy, but there it was:  he was looking in my eyes and one solitary tear streamed down.  That' when I knew, he was mine and I was his.  Thank you for the rememberance.  Great work!

~~Jamie      


I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
7 posted 2001-01-06 11:10 PM


love can hurt like a big-dog....!
but keep the dream alive..one day, it will be yours for real  

well written..

hugs, g

"sometimes a closed door provides us with walls to lean on....."
-kathleen vibbert



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