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Solstice Son
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0 posted 2001-01-04 05:23 PM


Give me your lips to kiss
Give me your hand to hold
Let's wander down life's highway
As Lovers brave and bold

Kiss me when it fancies you
Wherever we may be
Let all the envious watchers
See your passions there for me

Blaze for me my Darling
As my love burns bright for you
Let us make a rival for the sunset
Give a flesh pink glow to Moon

Give me your lips to kiss
I will give you mine
Ever walking down life's highway
Long past the end of Time

© Copyright 2001 Adam M.M. Stevanovic' - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-01-04 07:52 PM


Okay!!!....hehehe......Sol, this is just sooooo beautifully romantic!!

Denise

kcsgrandma
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2 posted 2001-01-05 01:01 AM


I'm in line right behind Denise!  Very very nice, and shows the diversity of your talent.  Nice to see you, too.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
3 posted 2001-01-05 07:01 AM


tender and romantic..nice..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2001-01-05 07:05 AM


"Sigh"...soooo romantic!  Ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



bestgirl911
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Clio, MI , United We Stand
5 posted 2001-01-05 08:59 AM



*sigh*


Suzanne Arlene
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Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2001-01-05 09:08 AM


Now that was a sweet poem.  Well done Sol
Brought out the softer side of you
Suzanne

a_little_girl
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7 posted 2001-01-05 03:00 PM


A very well done poem. How romantic!!


**No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm as long as I write.**
~a_little_girl

Wikket
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8 posted 2001-01-05 04:12 PM


*whew* is it warm in here or is it me?!  hehee  Great job Sol--I'm sure you'll win any woman over with this one!     

~~Jamie       


I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett

Solstice Son
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9 posted 2001-01-05 05:53 PM


Thank you one and all....yes..the softer side is there..most of the time threatening to undo my heart and mind and soul....glad you all enjoyed it...i'll see if I have anything else *G*

Sol

shira
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10 posted 2001-01-05 07:45 PM


Beautiful, just beautiful. Very sweet poem
dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
11 posted 2001-01-05 10:40 PM


this is the same guy who wrote about grover?...lol  

very romantic SOL..i like...  

hugs, g

"sometimes a closed door provides us with walls to lean on....."
-kathleen vibbert



Solstice Son
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12 posted 2001-01-08 03:50 PM


DV~~*LOL yes...I am the same guy who wrote about Grover.....beleive it or not..i wrote the Ode three minutes AFTER I wrote a Lover's Call....my mental metaoblism.....is as speedy as my physical metabolism....and I don't even drink coffee *LOL*

Sol

Nicole
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13 posted 2001-01-11 04:26 PM


Okay - so I had to bump this back up to the top, since it's just wonderfully sweet.  Well done, I enjoyed muchly  
Solstice Son
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14 posted 2001-01-12 07:38 AM


Satiate, wow thank you for the bump  *S* much the surprise as it is....

Sol

Romy
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15 posted 2001-01-12 08:47 AM


I really enjoyed this!  It reminds me of my own first love!  Very nice!
Dopey Dope
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16 posted 2001-01-12 01:02 PM


This was beautiful......I liked this very much.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Broken_Winged_Angel
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Small Town, Somewhere
17 posted 2001-01-12 11:49 PM


  I knew there was a reason I like you so much hon!  *lol*  Very good.

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

18 posted 2001-01-13 09:34 PM


SS,
this is so sweet and tender  

enjoyed

Maree  

I need a lullaby
a kiss goodnight
Angel sweet love of my life
Oh, I need this

~Natalie Merchant~

Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
Posts 469

19 posted 2001-01-15 07:32 AM


~~ just smiles at all the new comments...amazed..as always..at what touches us..especially when it comes fromsomeone like me~~

Sol

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