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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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Dreamscapes of illuminations feathery light billowing, meander from willow to pond. Incandescent light beams that float upon the meadows breeze releasing colors of hues yet to be born. Floating gossamer wings of scented petals that waft through beams of light and dance from glen to glen, bright upon the flight of winged beauty unseen yet visible to the traveler with mystic eye. Thus woven, a tapestry of neverending design that enfolds with sense of freedom dreamt, and of hazy irredescent light that fills this dream, with undreamt of imaginings. Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
A very peaceful scene you have penned here. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
graceful, sublime..vintage Ellie..sooo good..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is one of your best, I think, and that is high praise, because you are always good. It's hard to pick out favorite parts, but these phrases sort of leap out at me - "releasing colors of hues yet to be born" and "hazy irridescent light that fills this dream, with undreamt of imaginings". Such a lovely, ephemeral, and yes, dreamy quality to this!To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
very enjoyable read..like kcs, i marveled at such phrases like "colours of hue yet to be born", "unseen yet visible to the traveler", "neverending design that enfolds with sense of freedom dreamt".... i do hope that someday i will be able to pen such dreamy soothing works as you |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Ellie.... The title caught me and the poem held me entranced..from the first line to the last. Best |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Now that took me too a far off dreamy place. Beautiful Suzanne |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ellie, Once again you've woven a magical tapestry, the likes of which most cherished dreams flow from! Wonderful! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Thus woven, a tapestry of neverending design that enfolds with sense of freedom dreamt, and of hazy irredescent light that fills this dream, with undreamt of imaginings. serene and tranquil. enjoyed the read It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
So nice...So dreamy...makes me want to sleeeeeeeeeep! Great Job!~~Jamie   I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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shira Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88Hamburg, PA |
This is so soft and comforting. I just love all the imagery. This is a beautiful, warm poem that I really enjoyed reading. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
You seem to me , dear Ellie as one who has been caught up into poet's Heaven- but who somehow is still able to share with us the wonderment of it all. Your works of late are so superb & lofty--they can help but uplift our sagging spirits! David No Better Place do I know Than where Hearts knit as one, For in that grand experience, The Better ALL become. God Bless us All!!! |
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