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My Secret Wish |
Artemis Junior Member
since 2000-12-31
Posts 15Toronto,Ontario,Canada |
My Secret Wish As I sit here and ponder I quietly think of you, I am so in love with you, but I don't know what I should do. I wish I could confess to you the way that I feel, But if those feelings weren't reciprocated, I stop and ask myself, How would I deal? So, I have no other choice, But to keep my longing for you a secret, One that no one else knows but me, My feelings remain hidden deep within my heart, Only you can set them free. My secret wish is that one day you and I are together, That you take me in your arms and hold me forever, I want to be with you every waking moment And when I sleep at night, But what can I do to make you see the light? You are always in my thoughts and dreams, I can picture you in my future too, But even it my secret wish never becomes a reality, I will never stop loving you. |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
You are so passionate in this poem, Artemis! I hope whoever this person is, that he/she realizes your love...because the suspense is killing me too! I'll cross my fingers for you! ~~Jamie "...I mean, when I first met you, you were all like, 'Oh Phooey, I burned the darn muffins.' Now, you walk into a bar, and sailors come runnin' out!" |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
I agree this is very very passionate I hope it comes full circle Jane |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely! I hope your wish comes true! Denise |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
It's so hard waiting for someone to notice you are there and caring! You've written the feeling very well. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Artemis Junior Member
since 2000-12-31
Posts 15Toronto,Ontario,Canada |
This poem as well as my other one "If I Only Had One Chance With You" is about the same guy who I have such strong feelings for. As I explained in my poems, I am too scared to tell him, but he drives me crazy. What I should do about it, I just don't know. I have often thought of giving him the poem since it is about him, but I don't want to scare him off or lose his friendship. I guess only time will tell.Thanks all for listening. I appreciate it a lot. |
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