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The Perfect Cure |
bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Every time I think of him, My stomach turns in knots. I try hard to control it, But, it just won't stop. My mind just doesn't know, What it should be thinking. Hurry, can't you help me, I think I may be sinking. My heart is beating wildly, For me this is a first. If you don't do something soon, I think it will just burst. I lay in bed and think of him, I can't seem to sleep a wink. I've tried all I can think of, I've even counted sheep. So I'm asking very nicely, doc, Could you do something soon, This feeling won't go away, And I can hardly move, What? You cannot help me? Wait, what do you mean? You can't make it go away? It's the worst you've ever seen? There is one way, you say, To make this feeling stop? Well, doc, what is it? I'm just about to pop. Hey, where are you going? You can't just up and leave. I've looked so hard for the answer, Can't you help me, please? "Okay, I'll try to help," says doc, "But, it will have to be for life." Then he got down on one knee, And said, "Will you be my wife?" |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this is cute..just what I needed today.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BestGirl~ Absolutely adorable. The punch line packed it with a suprise ! Is it covered by insurance ??? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Pegasus.... Thank you, hope it made you smile =O) Marge... If only..... Best [This message has been edited by bestgirl911 (edited 12-21-2000).] |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
oh my goodness, that was a great picker upper, super ending...love it! |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Ooooooooooooh LLAAAAAAAA LAAAAAAAaaaaaa!!!! ...Jeepers!! You go away for a couple three weeks and look what happens!!! *G*....very nice hun....very nice indeed.... Sol |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Bestgirl, This was great. Fun read. Dawn |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
That was way too cute bestgirl enjoyed it from top to bottom Suzanne |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Sounds like the perfect cure for lovesickness, just what the doctor ordered! Loved it all, Best. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Wordancer..... Thank you...I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed it. Sol..=O) I hated being gone so long, but with the accident and the holidays I have been soooo busy, but I am back and enjoying it. Thank you for the wonderful comments as always you are very kind to me. Callie... Thank you for the nice comment. Suzanne... was just in a silly mood that day =O)thanks. KC... Thank you, I always appreciate your kind words. Best [This message has been edited by bestgirl911 (edited 12-22-2000).] |
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